Together And Yet Apart

Posted on 09/05/2009 by LynnAlexander

Their eyes met. Her breasts pressed against his chest. His thigh pushed between hers and his lips were everywhere.

They bounced and shook.

Her husband drove his Plymouth down the dirt road. At every jolt he heard the thump of his wife’s and best friend’s dismembered bodies in the boot.

Bill West

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12 Responses to Together And Yet Apart

  1. offbeatjim wittenberg says:
    09/05/2009 at

    Damn. Don’t mess with this guy’s wife.

    Frightening.

  2. Bill West says:
    09/06/2009 at

    Thanks offbeatjim.

    Glad you liked it.

  3. Bernardo Bolt Gregori says:
    09/06/2009 at

    Great story, Bill. I love the way you sewd introduction and denoument with cohesive threads of significances. And such a great title you came up with!
    Cheers,

    BBG

  4. Doug Mathewson says:
    09/07/2009 at

    Nice – liked how it didn’t go where I thought it was heading.

  5. Mike P says:
    09/07/2009 at

    Very cool. Loved how you controlled me.

  6. Bill West says:
    09/08/2009 at

    Thanks BBG and Doug for your kind words.

    Bill

  7. Richard Osgood says:
    09/08/2009 at

    Powerful stuff, Bill! Good to see you here–and the two of us back-to-back! Stop by the Factory and play the Sunday Five-to-Fifty (or fifty-five) when you get a chance. Keep up the good work, bro!

  8. Maggie says:
    09/10/2009 at

    This is a classic flash. One that will stay in the mind, short, deadly and brilliant!

    Maggie

  9. jennifer walmsley says:
    09/13/2009 at

    Scary in so few words.

  10. Bill says:
    09/19/2009 at

    Thanks Mike :¬)

  11. Bill says:
    09/19/2009 at

    Hi Richard
    Likewise! Thanks and see you in the Factory soon.

  12. Bill says:
    09/19/2009 at

    Hi Maggie

    Thanks for that. Much appreciated.